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A life of pain
Years of torture
Causes thy heart
To go cold

It’s grey like stone
Hard like rock
Blocked off to all
Who dares to break it

With this heart of stone
Crying is not an option
For support is what I must provide
To the grief of others

Doomed to live with this burden
This heart will last till my death
Upon which my death
Will release the demons of sorrow.
©2004-2009 ~balmung
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This is my newest poem. It is inspired by the current road blocks that are in front of me right now. I will explain the road blocks later but for now, I hope you enjoy this new work. Later.

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:iconyulii:
sounds a little sad to me but the writing sounds perfect together..its beautiful actually Craig..keep up the wonderful job..love reading your poems :hug::hug:
:iconkatboy-2499:
Nicely worded. Glad you stuck with the 4 line stanzas, keeps the poem moving fluently and what not. You can feel the emotion with the words you used, very nicely done. Keep up the good work!

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:heart: Jesus loves you. But everyone else thinks you're an asshole.
:iconviperxmns:
very nice- very clear wording too
:iconnox-witchblade:
Great poem as always, Balmung~!!!!! It's melancholy but I like it~! Great job

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:damphyr:  Kiki-myoumyou™
:iconbonnie-furry:
:( thats so sad...but really good :D

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i enjoy long walks on the beach, candle light dinners, and poking dead things with sticks.....yea i'm a keeper
:icondarkwoodsjourney: <--- for all JTTDW's refs
:iconkeitarka:
ur poetry definatly speakz from experience...
and itz kind creepy cuz the 3 poemz of urz ive read so far i can really relate to
thanx for putting the inexpressable down in wordz

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>^_^<
:icongreenley:
How sad. I like it. It's very straightfoward. :pills:

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